|makes me think this is what sin pioneer would like had it been made 3 years ago|
|thanks for the tip, though I dont know how I can use it to make my map better|
|great bm comment lnept, as always, on point with at least one.|
theres too many choke points around the map. Open up some of the areas, and even think about putting patches of rocky ground here and there for a more flashy look. It may be good to put in some trees here and there around those patches.
I dont like your expo placement.. though im sure its fine, it doesnt look appealling imo. Maybe try rearranging them a bit?
|The middle area is too narrow imo. That will be the main point of conflict between both players so I would open that up a bit. And generally remove some walls around the map, especially top left and bottom right.|
Also theres not enough gas, 6 min onlies and only 2 gas expos won't work. ZvT will be too hard to play. Add more gas.
|rocky ground added, gas expo added, some walls removed & shortend|
|everything is like floating in the middle of no where.|
|like your sperm?|
|Don't get bm, TVT, nightmarjoo is right. This map totally lacks continuity.|
Everything is just put somewhere. Especially all the non-asphalt stuff is placed really nubishly.
Your mineral lines are bad as usual, and your symmetry is off on several places.
Honestly: You didn't plan out this map at all before you started on it, did you?
|Don't worry be & Joel are cool & yeah this map was made in about 45 minutes cuz I was bored|
|well what u got here can be salvaged.. its really quite cool. With modifications, you really could make something good with what you got. Though the expo layout needs to be placed better.|
|too much randomly placed shit imo. open areas with no significance and such. maybe add water on the corners or something to tighten it up. most 2 player maps do not take the whole 128x128 btw.|