|Very plain at the moment working on the little things criticisms on balance and other elements are welcome.|
|The map is about as creative as the name|
and that's not a good thing
|in major need of decoration.|
natural expansions are way too open, it will be impossible for t to defend them. they should also usualyl have gas.
1 path to 3 nats is not good, even if it is wide like you made it. i would move the nats closer to the main choke, and make routes from the nats to the 3 expo area in the top left.
good job with the water behind the bases keeping siege tanks under control
|I guess I didnt quite make it clear, right now I'm worrying about placement movement of units retooling paths etc I havent gotten to decoration because if I decorate it and make it look all pretty then what happens if I have to completely remake a section. I'm screwed heh. I'm looking more for criticism on balance placement and unit movements before I even think about decorating it.|
|well, before you seek help, you should try to establish a normal map first. what you uploaded here is in a stage that goes at maximum for "first rough concept drawing" |
and drop the space between the "(2)" and the "found"
NO: (2) Found Temple
YES: (2)Found Temple
modified by flothefreak
|yea, post maps that are past the beginning stage. It doesnt look too great anyway... try keeping things balanced and equal landwise too.|
|Explain maybe why it doesnt look that great, what balance issues are you seeing. Which part has more land than the other. Be more specific please|
|the reason why it does not look bad: |
[quote]before you seek help, you should try to establish a normal map first. what you uploaded here is in a stage that goes at maximum for "first rough concept drawing"[end quote]
|lol wtf I can't find a temple, so much for "found temple" that thing in the east hardly counts unless you're aztec...|
|looks worse than my first map.(im still on my 4th map, so i can't critize. i need to do more mapping too).|
|It is really ugly. Three things:|
3. Next time use mirror.